Three short stories that make one short story. Seriously. Billed as a collection of shorts (three stories) which are really three chapters in a 16 page story in which a young girl has the hots for her girlfriend's boyfriend. He kisses her in the first story. She watches him having sex in the second story and finally does him herself in the third.
Some of this was interesting. There's a nice attempt to build the story - though it's too bad the author tries to sell it as three shorts.
This reads like a cheap, cheesy YA, except for the sex - too explicit for YA. Not exciting enough for erotica.
Overall this was disappointing.
2 Guilty Pleasure stars
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