From one of the best erotic fictions I've ever read to perhaps the absolute worst.
From the description online:
Omar has it all smarts, the looks and plenty of money in his bank account. The one thing he's lacking is a woman that he can call his own. That is until he meets a woman that he can't seem to get off his mind. Omar is willing to get his dream girl by any means necessary even if that means he has to get down and dirty. He's even willing to break a few laws or bones if necessary. Will Omar get the woman of his dreams or will his reputation of being a panty ripping sex machine get in the way of his happily ever after?
It's clearly meant to be tongue-in-cheek and I don't mind some humor in my porn, but this was awful. My biggest issue was the dialog. Not once could I ever imagine someone talking the way these characters did. And I'm not just referring to sexual conversation. Just their language in general was awful and not believable.
This was free (as is 99.9% of the erotica I read), but I still paid too much. It's books like this that give erotica a bad rap.
0 Guilty Pleasure stars
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