Thursday, June 11, 2026

A WOMAN OF EXPERIENCE - Paris Rivera

In general, I thought the writing quality was quite poor.  I'm taking a wild guess that the author doesn't speak/read/write English as a first language. However, I did like the stories - the concepts, the characters, their motives, and the sexual scenes.  It's just too bad that the actual writing wasn't better - this could have been a really powerful collection of stories.

Right off the bat, "Strangers on a Train: When Hiroko Met Sally" sets the tone. The temptation was excellent and the concern about potentially getting caught in public was well established. And with the second story, "If You Say SO, Professor,"  I noted - "A really hot story - too bad the dialog and set-up was so amateurish."

Likewise, with the next story, ""Sweet-Talking Her Professor: How Tessa Seduced her Sexy Professor," I wrote the comment: "Dialog simple, almost childlike. The story went on too long."

 However, with "Gym Crush" I only noted: "This was hot!" I also quite liked "Big City Massage."

I think this is pretty typical for self-published work ... some good ideas and moments of hot or interesting, but generally poor writing.

3-1/2 Guilty Pleasure stars 

 

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A WOMAN OF EXPERIENCE - Paris Rivera

In general, I thought the writing quality was quite poor.  I'm taking a wild guess that the author doesn't speak/read/write English ...